Tuesday, December 29, 2009

Metanoia?

*i didn't write this. my pen did.

Metanoia?

Maybe it’s the time to quit and hit the gates

Exit and forget, destroy the hidden wealth

What’s the use of living if we all die in the end?

Certainly I’m a confused child

Born with a crude smile


Questions with answers but are light years apart

Intuitions and man’s desires bedazzle one’s heart

Crippled and mauled by race of mankind

No man is kind; to spot one is a rare find


Prove the lines wrong, amaze my intellect

Lure me into faith, diffuse your precepts


Perhaps, and only perhaps I shall deem

Redeem thyself, maybe and only maybe


A sudden metanoia is possible perchance

Chase my ego, my pride, my arrogance


And yeah, I’ll give you a chance



3 comments:

  1. hey, i love this one. I think you're a great writer.I'll keep on reading your poems. :)

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  2. hey, i love this one. I think you're a great writer.I'll keep on reading your poems. :)

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  3. Hey.. what distiguishes literature from a tabloid is the emotions conveyed and how was it done.. I think the pais you fell now is nothing compared to what "answer" you would get in the end.. Remember my friend, "when it comes to love, you don't count the cost." Idol virgil... Love you :))))

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