Friday, December 18, 2009

Be Patient, Dear Patient

*here's another one.

Be Patient, Dear Patient

Happy go lucky, oh lucky lucky me

I’ve met the girl who’s the closest to my fantasies

A little crush and a little admiration

I love you so much! Or is it infatuation?

A slap. I need one please

Help! Someone please cure this disease!

Give me a dose, or better yet an overdose!

I’ve been sick! Love sick! Oh! Oh no!

I beg for sanity pills if there was such a thing

Please. I’m tired of those old High School flings

Promises of forever, oh, please cut the crap

Don’t make me throw up, please just never show up


Cured at last! Or maybe just a feeling

Psych! Not totally free, there are still some impurities!

The doctor said there’s still no medication


“Be patient, dear patient. Time shall alleviate your deepest confusions.”


1 comment:

  1. Logical Flow: Deep
    Choice and use of words: Very Contemporary
    Theme: Very Romantic
    Unique thing: Internal rhyme and rhythm
    Overall: Galing galing galing naman...
    inngit ako! :)))))))))))

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